I am sitting uncomfortably in my grandma’s big wardrobe just waiting for her to find me, so far it is taking so long it feels like hours. If you’re wondering what I am doing I’m playing hide and seek with my grandma. There are lots of colourful clothes around me and lots of cobwebs and dust too. Everything is dark, very dark and I can barely see out of the gap in the door. I hear footsteps they are getting closer and the dust makes me want to sneeze I must keep still and quiet as a mouse or she will find me. The footsteps get even closer than before they are right in front of me. I am still as a statue but it is very hard when the floor is cold and covered in shoes. The footsteps finally go away to a different spot and I stretch out. Suddenly they come back and I can’t help but laugh. When she opens the door of the closet I try to scare her with a loud ”PEEK-A-BOO”! Although it never scares her. The game is finally over but I wonder what will happen when I am the seeker.
Thursday 4 August 2016
The Time I Hid.
I am sitting uncomfortably in my grandma’s big wardrobe just waiting for her to find me, so far it is taking so long it feels like hours. If you’re wondering what I am doing I’m playing hide and seek with my grandma. There are lots of colourful clothes around me and lots of cobwebs and dust too. Everything is dark, very dark and I can barely see out of the gap in the door. I hear footsteps they are getting closer and the dust makes me want to sneeze I must keep still and quiet as a mouse or she will find me. The footsteps get even closer than before they are right in front of me. I am still as a statue but it is very hard when the floor is cold and covered in shoes. The footsteps finally go away to a different spot and I stretch out. Suddenly they come back and I can’t help but laugh. When she opens the door of the closet I try to scare her with a loud ”PEEK-A-BOO”! Although it never scares her. The game is finally over but I wonder what will happen when I am the seeker.
I am sitting uncomfortably in my grandma’s big wardrobe just waiting for her to find me, so far it is taking so long it feels like hours. If you’re wondering what I am doing I’m playing hide and seek with my grandma. There are lots of colourful clothes around me and lots of cobwebs and dust too. Everything is dark, very dark and I can barely see out of the gap in the door. I hear footsteps they are getting closer and the dust makes me want to sneeze I must keep still and quiet as a mouse or she will find me. The footsteps get even closer than before they are right in front of me. I am still as a statue but it is very hard when the floor is cold and covered in shoes. The footsteps finally go away to a different spot and I stretch out. Suddenly they come back and I can’t help but laugh. When she opens the door of the closet I try to scare her with a loud ”PEEK-A-BOO”! Although it never scares her. The game is finally over but I wonder what will happen when I am the seeker.
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Hi me Bridget,
ReplyDeletethat was a cool story, I like it when you say you can barely see
out of the gap in the door. One bit I think you should have done is put a comma in: want to sneeze, I must keep still... There should be a comma but apart from that terrific story!!! :-)
Thank you Bridget I am glad you like my story
DeleteHi It's me Ella
ReplyDeleteI love the story and all the things like the foot steps are getting closer.
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Thanks for the nice comment Ella
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