Kia ora Natasha, my name is Anamaria from St. Patrick's School and I am a year 5 student. I really like your Term emoji because it looks funny and a bit scary at the same time. It looks funny because of the emoji's sleepy eyes and it looks a bit scary because of the vampire ears and tail. You should change the emoji's left hand to red because it looks a bit strange with a red hand and a peach coloured hand. You can check out my blog posts at spsanamariam.blogspot.co.nz!
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Kia ora Natasha, my name is Anamaria from St. Patrick's School and I am a year 5 student. I really like your Term emoji because it looks funny and a bit scary at the same time. It looks funny because of the emoji's sleepy eyes and it looks a bit scary because of the vampire ears and tail. You should change the emoji's left hand to red because it looks a bit strange with a red hand and a peach coloured hand. You can check out my blog posts at spsanamariam.blogspot.co.nz!
ReplyDeletethanks for the tip Anamaria I will make sure to improve for the end of year emoji ;D
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