Hi Natasha. I really like your video about "THE VAN"! because it covers everything you need to know about surviving in a van for a long car trip but one thing you need to remember to do in the future is more punctuation because you are missing some comas. Bye Sinead.
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Hi Natasha.
ReplyDeleteI really like your video about "THE VAN"! because it covers everything you need to know about surviving in a van for a long car trip but one thing you need to remember to do in the future is more punctuation because you are missing some comas.
Bye
Sinead.
thanks for the feedback I will try to have more comas next time
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